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Monday, November 11, 2019

Writing | Apocalyptic

Hello everyone this past few weeks we had to make our own sentences about the photo.

  1. Write a simple sentence that describes something about the picture.
  2. Add adjectives to the simple sentence, to add more detail.
  3. Add more language features like similes or metaphors to enhance the sentence.
  4. Use topic words directly related to the picture.
  5. Use emotive language to create/clarify mood.
  6. Paint a clear picture in the mind of my readers and give the reader detailed and specific information.

So this is the photo that I picked:

And this is the sentences that I wrote:

  1. A lonely city.
  2. An unpopulated forsaken city. 
  3. An unpopulated forsaken city like a city from the movie World War Z. 
  4. A sad lonely unpopulated forsaken city with broken buildings every turn and cars with no electricity.
  5. A sad destroyed and deserted city covered with smokes and stones, full of broken cars and forsaken buildings. Sad souls of the dead bodies whispering angrily. 
  6. A city that looks like the city from the movie World War Z. Lost, destroyed and deserted. Submerge in ash, radiation, forsaken buildings at every turn, wrecked cars, and dead bodies under the remnants. The sad souls whispering angrily. Gunfire rings across the streets of the city.

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